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" Eva is a XXI century girl self-obsessed with the idea she was born to recreate Genesis. "
Javiera Y. 2011
Javiera Y. 2011
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This is a good drawing. Even with very little context, you've created narrative through small elements and the expression on her face. There is room for improvement, and most of it is just anatomical.
Definitely get reference for the torso. Her chest and torso come straight down onto her hips in an almost cylindrical form. As it is right now, it makes her feel incredibly stiff. There are people in the world who are solidly built, but not solid like a cylinder. Bodies are pliable, and there would most certainly be some folding and creasing and stretching of the body.
Her breasts are also a bit too far spaced apart, especially if they are that rounded. Generally, the wider the chest, the less likely you are to have two spherical breasts with a lot of space between them. Either making the chest smaller, therefore decreasing the distance between the breasts, or making her breasts less shapely would be a good solution.
This is a great start. Keep up the good work!
Definitely get reference for the torso. Her chest and torso come straight down onto her hips in an almost cylindrical form. As it is right now, it makes her feel incredibly stiff. There are people in the world who are solidly built, but not solid like a cylinder. Bodies are pliable, and there would most certainly be some folding and creasing and stretching of the body.
Her breasts are also a bit too far spaced apart, especially if they are that rounded. Generally, the wider the chest, the less likely you are to have two spherical breasts with a lot of space between them. Either making the chest smaller, therefore decreasing the distance between the breasts, or making her breasts less shapely would be a good solution.
This is a great start. Keep up the good work!